<英文作文>二、英文作文(占2 0 分)
說明︰1.依提示在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文。 文長至少120個單詞(words)。
提示:每個人或多或少都曾有不經意得罪他人或冒犯他人的經驗,請以個人或親友的經驗為例,寫一篇英文作文。文分兩段,第一段描述事件發生的始末,第二段說明自己或親友如何彌補這個失誤所造成的傷害,並探討這個事件對你的影響或啟示。
評分原則:依內容(是否描述事件始末、是否說明彌補措施與啟示)、組織(結構清晰)、文法句構(正確多樣)、字彙拼字(準確適切)評分,字數不足扣1分。滿分參考範文:
Last month, I accidentally offended my best friend Lily. We were discussing a school project, and I casually commented that her idea was “not practical at all” without thinking. She immediately fell silent and left angrily. Later, I realized my words were too direct and hurt her feelings—she had spent three nights working on that idea.
To make up for it, I wrote her a sincere letter apologizing for my thoughtlessness and praised the creative parts of her project. I also invited her to our favorite café to talk things through. She finally forgave me after seeing my sincerity. This experience taught me that words can be powerful, so I should always think twice before speaking. It also made me understand that timely apologies and empathy are key to maintaining friendships.。略解:第一段描述「直言否定朋友構思致其生氣」的事件;第二段說明「寫信道歉、約談和解」的彌補措施,並提「謹慎言語、同理心」的啟示,符合題目要求,語言通順,符合評分重點(內容充實、語言能力佳)。 報錯
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